Potter Sue of the Day
06 July 2009 @ 01:21 pm
TITLE: Fire in a Storm
PERPETRATOR: Of Crimson Moonlight
SUE-O-METER: (awful)

FULL NAME: Hedwig
SPECIES: owl/witch
HAIR: "black jet locks of hair streamed to the side of her face"
EYES: "dark eyes that resembled so much of the owl that had been caged"
MARKINGS: "the form of a young girl at the tender age of her late teens"
POSSESSIONS: "White apparel" and "a long white cloak that hung from her shoulders".

ORIGIN: Snape's dying owl used to be a human. He became an owl to help save people from Voldemort. As it is permanent, he can't switch back. Hedwig is sad that she can't carry letters for Harry. The old owl offers to turn her into a human, permanently, so she can help Harry, but on the condition that she keeps Snape company because he has no friends.
CONNECTIONS TO CANON: Is Hedwig. When she is transformed, Sirius, Remus and Ron catch her running from the owlery, thinking she is a spy. She jumps out the window to bring Harry Ron's hat, so he "can know his friends are okay." Then she ignores her injuries and bumps into Draco, who knows she is a transformed animal. He promises to help her find her way if she goes to the movies with him. She does, and then remembers that she is injured after the movie and blacks out.
SPECIAL ABILITIES: Mute. Can understand "owl".

NOTES: This could have been handled well, with the learning how to be human bits, but it's just absurd!

Why would Draco do this? )
 
 
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Potter Sue of the Day
07 February 2005 @ 08:05 pm
This is new.

TITLE: Hedwig's Wish
PERPETRATOR: Arkaina

SUE-O-METER: BAD (bad)

FULL NAME: Hedwig
SPECIES: Human/Witch - or I guess witch, since she can fly a broom.
HAIR: 'long, silvery white hair'
EYES: 'startling gold eyes', 'bright gold eyes'. They're also described as 'amber'.
MARKINGS: none mentioned.
POSESSIONS: a Hogwarts uniform. Where she got it from is unexplained.

ORIGIN: Hermione spills a 'desire potion' on Hedwig. The potion grants a person's greatest desire for 24 hours, and apparently Hedwig's greatest desire is to do Harry be human.
CONNECTIONS TO CANON: Was once Harry's owl.
SPECIAL ABILITIES: none mentioned.

NOTES: Well, all things considered, it's points for trying. I mean, this could have been a lot worse... we could have had tart!Hedwig heading straight into a sex scene. Instead, we've got perky!Hedwig wanting to try flying a broom, which is actually kind of cute. But still... the implication is there, and it is wrong, wrong, wrong. Thank you.

SAMPLE: Me Hedwig, You Hermy. )
 
 
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