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TITLE: Harry Potter:Arms of the Angel and Time After Time
PERPETRATOR: MacKenzieBlueEyes Minions, go to the profile, and look at the poll.
SUE-O-METER:
(awful)
FULL NAME: Annie Black aka Blue
SPECIES: Haven
HAIR: "Dark ashy brown hair that curled in perfect soft ringlets"
EYES: "the most brilliant blue eyes [Harry] had ever seen"
MARKINGS: "She looked all of sixteen, petite frame, almost too skinny. She had very pale yet pretty milky white skin, a group of freckles grace the bridge of her very pretty face". She has "creamy, perfectly toned legs".
POSSESSIONS: An "american accent. It wasn't harsh like most, yet raspy and feminine at the same time...(A/N: think Ellen Pompeo voice... a little higher)". She wears a lot of blue. She has a "a silver necklace, with squarish pendant that had tiny, delicate diamonds leading to a deep blue sapphire in the middle..." Christmas presents (lots) including: "a new wand, rowan wood, her own hair as it's core (she thought she felt something weird as she was falling asleep a week ago...little did she know it was Harry and Sirius pulling out a few pieces of her hair with her muggle tweezers...) 9 and a half inches, light but powerful... It was the exact same as her old wand except the handle was made out of an almost crystal like material and had little blue jewels between where the wand and the handle met; it almost matched the necklace Harry had given her. She had lost her old wand when she was attacked in November. As she took the wand in her hand she could feel the magic surging through her whole body. She loved wandless magic, but she couldn't deny the effect that holding a wand in her hand did to her. She felt five times more powerful, more secure, more centered...". She also has: "a simple black, almost fifties style skirt that came to right below her knees [...] a red, slightly v-kneck, form fitting sweater, and little black flats..."
ORIGIN: This is a revised version of the original story, God help us.
CONNECTIONS TO CANON: Sirius' daughter and Lupin's Goddaughter. She becomes Hermione's friend the summer going into seventh year. Harry gets jealous when she makes out with Dean, because they were a couple, kinda, sorta. Many chapters later they get to stay in Grimmauld Place together, all alone. Ooooo!
SPECIAL ABILITIES: She is a "Haven". What is that? The Suethor lets us know: "A Haven, literally means the same as the word 'Haven,' any place of safety, shelter, or refuge. A Haven is almost a safe harbor for witches and wizards. Those blessed the powers of a Haven... are invincible due to the abililty of casting a shield or safe harbor. They don't feel pain within this shield, and are protected from spells/charms. Havens have the ability to heal much quicker than the meer mortal and even faster than regular witches and wizards. But the most important and impressive power of a Haven is that when they are threatned.. or being physically harmed by a spell or charm, a ring like barrier surrounds their body casting a shield protecting them from any harm. The really amazing Haven's can protect others.. but it's only those who work diligently that have that ability.They also have a higher apititude for learning purposes. They are quite intelligent but are also kind an loving, due to their duties of protecting and saving the lives of others. Haven's are not immortal though... they can die but most of natural causes and are Haven's always of the female gender. The wizarding world sees a Haven about every five centuries. (This is just something I made up...)"
NOTES: Chapter 17 onwards is a completely different story, I'm not impressed. The Suethor explains her logic: "Author's note: This is not the end of the story of Harry and Annie. As I said, time is simply going to rewind itself giving their past selves another shot at it. I think of the past, the present, and the future as ever going things. They never stop, because time never truly stops. So their pastselves will have no clue of their futures. Basically, we're going back to 1980 to see how things could pan out...
This may not make sense at the moment, but it will when I start writing it. I will post this in this same fic thread so the story will still be in the Arms of the Angel link, just with another story after it. After things are 'fixed...' we'll wind up where we are."
( What is a kneck? )
TITLE: Harry Potter:Arms of the Angel and Time After Time
PERPETRATOR: MacKenzieBlueEyes Minions, go to the profile, and look at the poll.
SUE-O-METER:
(awful)FULL NAME: Annie Black aka Blue
SPECIES: Haven
HAIR: "Dark ashy brown hair that curled in perfect soft ringlets"
EYES: "the most brilliant blue eyes [Harry] had ever seen"
MARKINGS: "She looked all of sixteen, petite frame, almost too skinny. She had very pale yet pretty milky white skin, a group of freckles grace the bridge of her very pretty face". She has "creamy, perfectly toned legs".
POSSESSIONS: An "american accent. It wasn't harsh like most, yet raspy and feminine at the same time...(A/N: think Ellen Pompeo voice... a little higher)". She wears a lot of blue. She has a "a silver necklace, with squarish pendant that had tiny, delicate diamonds leading to a deep blue sapphire in the middle..." Christmas presents (lots) including: "a new wand, rowan wood, her own hair as it's core (she thought she felt something weird as she was falling asleep a week ago...little did she know it was Harry and Sirius pulling out a few pieces of her hair with her muggle tweezers...) 9 and a half inches, light but powerful... It was the exact same as her old wand except the handle was made out of an almost crystal like material and had little blue jewels between where the wand and the handle met; it almost matched the necklace Harry had given her. She had lost her old wand when she was attacked in November. As she took the wand in her hand she could feel the magic surging through her whole body. She loved wandless magic, but she couldn't deny the effect that holding a wand in her hand did to her. She felt five times more powerful, more secure, more centered...". She also has: "a simple black, almost fifties style skirt that came to right below her knees [...] a red, slightly v-kneck, form fitting sweater, and little black flats..."
ORIGIN: This is a revised version of the original story, God help us.
CONNECTIONS TO CANON: Sirius' daughter and Lupin's Goddaughter. She becomes Hermione's friend the summer going into seventh year. Harry gets jealous when she makes out with Dean, because they were a couple, kinda, sorta. Many chapters later they get to stay in Grimmauld Place together, all alone. Ooooo!
SPECIAL ABILITIES: She is a "Haven". What is that? The Suethor lets us know: "A Haven, literally means the same as the word 'Haven,' any place of safety, shelter, or refuge. A Haven is almost a safe harbor for witches and wizards. Those blessed the powers of a Haven... are invincible due to the abililty of casting a shield or safe harbor. They don't feel pain within this shield, and are protected from spells/charms. Havens have the ability to heal much quicker than the meer mortal and even faster than regular witches and wizards. But the most important and impressive power of a Haven is that when they are threatned.. or being physically harmed by a spell or charm, a ring like barrier surrounds their body casting a shield protecting them from any harm. The really amazing Haven's can protect others.. but it's only those who work diligently that have that ability.They also have a higher apititude for learning purposes. They are quite intelligent but are also kind an loving, due to their duties of protecting and saving the lives of others. Haven's are not immortal though... they can die but most of natural causes and are Haven's always of the female gender. The wizarding world sees a Haven about every five centuries. (This is just something I made up...)"
NOTES: Chapter 17 onwards is a completely different story, I'm not impressed. The Suethor explains her logic: "Author's note: This is not the end of the story of Harry and Annie. As I said, time is simply going to rewind itself giving their past selves another shot at it. I think of the past, the present, and the future as ever going things. They never stop, because time never truly stops. So their pastselves will have no clue of their futures. Basically, we're going back to 1980 to see how things could pan out...
This may not make sense at the moment, but it will when I start writing it. I will post this in this same fic thread so the story will still be in the Arms of the Angel link, just with another story after it. After things are 'fixed...' we'll wind up where we are."
( What is a kneck? )
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