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ghessy's first Harry Potter Sue was
Just a Japanese Girl Prodigy.
Jennifer has sent us her First Harry Potter Sue! When she first found
pottersues she wanted to have this story sporked. Sadly it was deleted from the archive she found it at. Recently, for the "My First Sue" activity, she found it on fanfiction.net! It has even been updated, but she's far to scarred to find out what happened.
TITLE: Elemental Prophecies: part one PERPETRATOR: Nival Vixen SUE-O-METER: 
(toxic)
FULL NAME: Ginvera "Ginny" Weasley
SPECIES: Elemental
HAIR: shoulder-length and red
EYES: blue
MARKINGS: Bruises from Harry's beatings.
POSSESSIONS: A "thought wand", ash wood 8 1/2 inches long, "mermaid scale, unicorn hair and a gryffin feather. Her wand had chosen her, as if it knew she needed him. Mr Ollivander had been pleased to sell it, saying it had been in the shop for over 10, 000 years. Ginny believed him, she could feel it's ancient power." It's named Tzal that she can communicate with telepathically. No one else knows that she and her wand chat. An ancient letter written in the Elemental language that describe their magical abilities. Ginny has "socks and hoes". A painting that Draco made for her. Mountains of "Get Well" presents. An expandable Invisibility Cloak. An Ancient wedding ring, with the inscription "Together through life and past death". A white dress, green ribbon, silver tiara.
ORIGIN: An abusive relationship with Harry in her sixth year. One day at school the Professor discover that both Ginny and Draco are Elements. There is a prophesy about them. It reads, "Two the same but different must be found. They must learn to love again, then be bound. If evil is to be defeated they have to love each other Past death, through life and always be together. One shall have a heart of golden fire, the other a heart of silver ice. Their hearts will be surrounded by steel that only the other can break. Their souls are fire of water, water of earth, and fire on air. Element is the name of the pair". Soooo, Draco and Ginny are going to be forced into marriage, and will defeat evil.
CONNECTIONS TO CANON: In the Prologue, we learn that Harry Potter has been raping Ginny for the last six months. If she resists then he would hurt her family. As a result she has not spoken to anyone for six months. She goes to Potions early, and Snape talks to her. She communicates with hand signals and written notes. Snape is very kind to her, assigning her house points and is impressed with her work. McGonagall is teaching her Charms privately. Snape sends her to Dumbledore, praising her abilities, and recommends that she go into a seventh year class. Dumbledore lets her choose which class and she picks Slytherin. Harry forces Ginny to meet him at the Astronomy Tower, and as he is raping her Tzal/Ginny attacks Harry. She brings him to the Hospital Wing. Upon leaving Draco teases her, asking what did Harry do to her? He can tell from her reaction that he struck something deep inside her, and is left wondering about what happened that would cause Ginny to curse Harry. In her DADA class, Moody sees through her glamour spells, and sees her bruises. He also sees "fire" because she is an Element. Moody finds out that Draco is an Element and Dumbledore calls a meeting. In the meeting he tells them about the prophesy and tells them that they are the Elementals in the prophesy. Then they have dinner together where they test out their new powers. The next day Rapist/Evil Harry harasses Ginny, she defends herself and Draco shows up to help her escape. After they escape, Harry says to himself, "I'll get you for that Ginny. Putting Lumos on me! Making me look like a fool!" This made me crack up! They don't trust McGonagall. Secretly, McGonagall is working for Voldemort, because she is married to him. Then for many chapters Draco and Ginny get to know each other and show off their powers. When Harry is walking down the hall, Ginny changes her appearance and demands that Draco kisses her. The trio made rude comments. Hermione yells, "He's got a new whore!" WTF?! Then Harry sends her a note saying that she doesn't do it for him anymore, so he's going to kill her. But, because he's not so bad he is going to give her one last chance to make him come. They create a trap, and Hannah catches Harry raping Ginny. Draco punches Harry, and then the big brothers Ron and "Derek" come in to add some more punches. Then Ginny slits her wrists, saying that Voldemort made her do it. Draco saves her using his powers. He tells her that he loves her. Ginny is in a coma to escape her pain. In her mind, her and Draco have to completely three challenges if they want to see each other again. One is a stupid quiz, the next is a pseudo lie-detector, and the last is a maze. Obviously they pass all the challenges. Ginny wakes up from her coma. All of Hogwarts has gone to Hogsmede to buy her presents. They all file into the Hospital Wing to give them to her. Cho calls her a slut, so Ginny curses her. They decide that they can fight Voldemort. Then they get married in Dumbeldore's office. And Ginny concieves Draco's daughter.
SPECIAL ABILITIES: She is very smart, and is a head of the class in Potions and Charms. She can enter Dumbledore's office using a "thought pass". They installed it for her when they realized that she won't speak. "Alastar" Moody discovers that she is an Element: "His magical eye swivelled to her, and all it could see was a fire. He looked at her heart and saw a gold fire surrounded by steel, then he forced himself to look at all of her, the fire intensley bright. He saw a fire, within the fire was water. At a closer look, the water looked like it was made from the earth, and the 'fire' sat on the air". The same day, he also notices that Draco is an Element: "Out o the corner of his magical eye, he saw something that looked silver. He looked properly and saw Draco. He was the same as Ginny had been: fire of water, water of earth and fire on air. They were the same, except for one thing: their hearts. Ginny's was a gold fire surrounded by steel, and Draco's was silver ice, but also surrounded by steel". When angry, they can make spheres of light surround themselves. Ginny's is golden. The Elementals left a list of the magical abilities that Ginny and Draco are going to inherit:
"1) You will be able to read, write and speak every language fluently,
2) You will both be able to fly, but only if you are within a 100 metre radius of each other,
3) If you both sing at the same time, you can knock a person unconcious (only if you want that to happen though),
4) You will have telekenisis (the ability to move objects with your mind),
5) You can become invisible at will,
6) You can change into any animal of your choosing (without having to qualify as an Animagus),
7) You will be able to communicate to each other through telepathy,
8) You will both be able to do any type of art perfectly,
9) You can stop time for 10 minutes maximum (you will only be able to do this twice a day, so choose your times carefully and wisely)
10) You will both have spheres that react to strong emotions. They will also be activated through willpower or if you need it. You will both have to control your emotions better so you don't lose control infront of anyone, Muggle or wizard.
These powers will come into affect after you have both agreed on one pwer from the above list not to have until you have fallen in love." They choose to abstain from telepathy until they fall in love. Also, "The last Element descendants live inside of you. They may come out of you to guide you in your quest. They may also (with or without permission) take over your bodies for a short amount of time. You will become very weak and tired with both of these adjustments, but you will get used to it after a few times. On the first few attempts, we suggest that you have a large portion of chocolate handy." They can speak Elementa, the language of the Elementals. She received 2330 N.E.W.T.S.
NOTES: There are
pictures! I love it when there are pictures and banners, it takes the sporking to another level. Harry is so commically evil. According to the Suethor, "shrieked" or "loudly" is not a word. The Suethor claims that Slytherin is "(Satan to Jesus believers)".
( There are 29 chapters. I stopped at 11. )
(toxic)
nauseated
amused
tired
(bad)
silly
(awful)
annoyed
(bad)
predatory
hungry
I was asleep :(
okay
accomplished
bouncy
