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TITLE: Draco's transformation
PERPETRATOR: karen87
SUE-O-METER: (toxic)


FULL NAME: Maira Macha
SPECIES: Ancient
HAIR: "fiery red hair that’s falling down her shoulders"
EYES: "emerald"
MARKINGS: She is beautiful.
POSSESSIONS: She has "a green robe and a dark green cloak". Stu-brothers Gewain and Garreth.

ORIGIN: The "legendary Island of Avalon". She is going to be the "next high priestess" there.
CONNECTIONS TO CANON: She is the new History of Magic professor. Why they need a new one, God only knows. Her historical knowledge gains the admiration of the school. After seeing her for 30 seconds, Draco proclaims that she is the only reason he has for living. OOC-Snape tells him to stay away from her. She needs directions to where she is staying, the "Slyhterin dungeon" of course, and Draco is there to guide her, and to catch her when she falls down the stairs. We learn from her brothers that they are on some sort of mission to bring Draco back to Avalon. There is a prophecy telling us that he is a "a special boy" and that "he will change our world forever". Maira wants to like him anyways. He becomes very nice and sweet for her, and all of the students are excited to be in her class. She tricks Draco with some sort of "blood bond" and he gets very sick and they transport him to Avalon.
SPECIAL ABILITIES: Can transform Draco into some love-sick puppy. She can teleport?

NOTES: I command everyone to read the whole thing, and to not flame the Suethor. I never want to see this story deleted.

This is hilarious! Look at this non-Sue related part:

Suddenly Draco wakes up.

“Professor Snape? Are there?” Draco asks in a weak voice.

“Yes I’m here!” Snape answers

“Am I going to die? I’m so cold!” Draco says.

“No, you wouldn’t die! I will do everything to save you!” Snape says.

“But maybe it’s to late! Maybe I will die! I have to tell you that I am not afraid to die! It only depresses me that I have to die so young! But maybe it’s just my time!

And if it is just let me go than!” Draco says.

Snape starts to cry.

“No Draco. It’s not your time! You’re to young to die! I wouldn’t let you go! I would never forgive myself if you die! You know that I love you! You’re as close to me as a son could be! “ Snape says with a voice full of emotion.

“If Harry and his friends come back, please asks theme to come to me! I want to confess! I want to ask their forgiveness for all the bad things I have done! I want to die with a clear conscience!” Draco says.

Snape who can’t take it any longer leaves the hospital wing and he meets Dumbledore and Harry and his friends. He tells them Draco’s wish.

They quickly enter the hospital wing.

When they are gone Snape embraces Dumbledore and he starts to cry. Dumbledore tries to comfort him.

Harry and his friends are standing before Draco’s bedside.

“Hermione, Ron and Harry, I have the feeling that I’m dying! And because I’m dying I have to confess something. I know that I was a very bad and evil boy! I was a spoiled brat! I have always bullied you! But I have to tell you that I never wanted to do it! My father forced me to do it! I rather had become your friend! If I had only the change! But I didn’t have the change. And now I will never have. But I have to tell you that I have always felt a great affection for you all! I’m sorry that I have to leave you at such a young age! I wish you all a warm farewell!” Draco says while tears are streaming down his face.

Harry and his friends are also crying. The all give him a group hug hoping that this not the lost time that they see him! The leave him behind to give him some rest. Hoping that the will meet again.

Ten minutes later Maira arrives in the hospital wing. She tells him that they will bring him to Avalon because that the only place in the magical world ware they can save him. Only their healers have the right skills to heal him.

Draco insist and they teletransport him to the Island of legends leaving Hogwarts behind.


*wipes aways tears* That was so amazing.

( I will be shocked if the Suethor is a native English speaker. )