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Entry tags:crossover, lily luna-sue, related to harry, related to voldemort

Thanks to an anonymous minion for sending in today's Sue!

TITLE: Mid Night Desires
PERPETRATOR: SeleneMaeAysel
SUE-O-METER: (awful)

FULL NAME: Lily Luna Potter
SPECIES: Witch
HAIR: "long black hair was pulled back in an intricate bun"
EYES: not described
MARKINGS: none described
POSSESSIONS: "special gloves" that keep her powers in control, a room decorated in Slytherin colours, an advanced Charms book, a digital watch, "black high heeled shoes", and "gold hoop earrings".

ORIGIN: Harry Potter did not marry Ginny Weasley. He married Brianne Riddle, Voldemort's daughter. Lily Luna is their daughter, and happens to be in love with a Cullen.
CONNECTIONS TO CANON: Harry's daughter, Voldemort's granddaughter. She is sorted into Slytherin. Voldemort didn't die, he was just "weakened", and his daughter, and granddaughter are Death Eaters. She is Voldemort's "gem" and he relies on her for many missions. She is one of the "most loved and most hated" students in Hogwarts, and she is seeker on the Slytherin Quidditch team. Pansy and Draco's daughter, Daisy, hates her. Harry and his wife break-up, and the same day Voldemort "steps down" as the leader of the Death Eaters. He passes the leadership on to his two daughters, Bellona and Brianne. Lily acts angsty and decides that she does not want to stay in England. Her aunt offers to watch out for her and set up a "mini-headquarters" wherever Lily wants to live. After closing her eyes and pointing at a map, she discovers that she chose Forks, Washington. Obviously she is going to be paired with Edward, or Jasper, or Renesemee.
SPECIAL ABILITIES: She has "some special powers that she had trouble controlling", especially when she is angry.

NOTES: Wow. This is full of lol-worthy drama. I highly recommend everyone read the whole story.


SAMPLE:

You would think that being the daughter to the Boy Who Lived was all fun and games wouldn’t you? Well, no, unfortunately, it wasn’t. You see, Harry never married Ginny Weasley. Instead, he married a woman named Brianne Riddle. Yes, that’s correct…Brianne Riddle. Brianne is Lily’s mother. Lily comes from a family that is both loved and hated in the wizarding world.

It was especially hard for Lily to make any friends at Hogwarts. Not to mention she had some special powers that she had trouble controlling. She wore these special gloves to keep them under control. If not, well, you didn’t want to be in her way when she was angry.

So Lily sat up in her room. It was dressed up in Slytherin colors. It was just as well that she didn’t get sorted into Gryffindor like her dad. She probably would have gone insane. Everyone would have wanted to be friends with her. The fact that she was in Slytherin deterred them from going near her. Rumors flew around school about Lily being related to the world’s most dangerous dark wizard, Lord Voldemort. Lily neither confirmed, nor denied these rumors. She simply let people think what they wanted to.

Summertime was always very quiet for Lily. She didn’t particularly enjoy being home with her parents, who often fought. Harry was always out trying to convince the Ministry of Magic that the Riddles were up to no good. Even after Voldemort’s downfall, Harry still kept a close watch on the Death Eaters. While Voldemort did not die, he was still very weak. As Head Auror, it was Harry’s objective to catch any of the Death Eaters that had escaped Azkaban, and were starting trouble.

This drove Brianne insane. That was mostly due to the fact that she was one of those Death Eaters, as was her daughter, Lily. Lily was seen as Lord Voldemort’s gem, and he often called upon her for assignments and missions. Lily didn’t mind it at first, but Lord Voldemort was calling upon her for too much lately. It was starting to make her uneasy. She didn’t want to follow down the same path as Bellatrix LeStrange and Lucius Malfoy. Look where they ended up…dead and in Azkaban.

It was a cold, dark night in the Potter house. Lily was sitting in her room, reading one of her summer books. She attended Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry, and her Charms Professor assigned her to read an advanced charmed book. Seeing as how Lily’s father was Harry Potter, people expected great things from her. She was one of the most loved and hated students in Hogwarts. She excelled in pretty much everything. She made Seeker for the Slytherin Quidditch team. Only one girl truly hated her, and that was Daisy Malfoy, Pansy Parkinson and Draco Malfoy’s daughter.

Lily sat up on her green and black bed reading her Charms book. Her window was open, and it let a nice cool breeze blow into the room. She looked up from her book as her digital watched beeped the time. 11 pm already? Had she really been reading for four hours straight? Lily put down her book and bookmarked where she left off. She was just starting to read about jinxes. Standing up, she yawned and stretched, and as she did so, she nearly fell over back onto her bed. Blinking several times, she looked at a picture of her and her two other siblings, Joseph, Aiden. She smiled as the people in the picture waved to her. Naturally, she waved back. Lily jumped at the sound of a vase breaking downstairs.

“DAMN IT HARRY,” Brianne shouted at him as he walked in several hours later then he had said he would. “I’M SICK OF THIS!”

“But Brianne,” Harry said calmly. “You know it’s my job to watch the Death Eaters. We had a report come in saying there was a suspicious person in Diagon Alley. Did you expect that I was going to let this one slide? I had to stay Brianne. I’m Head Auror.”

“You’re only Head Auror because you weakened my father. You’re only Head Auror because nobody else wanted the job,” Brianne spat in his face.

She was in black lingerie and pacing back and forth furiously downstairs in the living room. Harry sat down calmly on his custom designed leather chair. Brianne brushed a piece of her dirty blond hair out of her face, and folded her arms across her chest. She had finally stopped pacing, and was now glaring at Harry.

“Then what do you propose I do Bree,” Harry argued. “Quit my job?”

“That would be nice,” Bree agreed as she finally sat down on the sofa.

“Bree, you know I can’t just quit,” Harry said defensively.

“I hardly ever get to see you. It’s not easy raising the kids alone.”

“But you aren’t alone Bree. You have me.”

“No, Harry, I really don’t have you. You would rather spend time finding and capturing Death Eaters, then be with your own family.”

“That’s not true.”

“When was the last time we had dinner together?”

“Um, well, um,” Harry stuttered as he tried to remember exactly how long it had been.

“See? You’re never around.”

“Then what do you propose we do Brianne? I can’t just quit work. How else are we going to pay the bills?”

“I know Harry. I just miss you,” Bree said as her face fell.

Bree sat on the edge of the couch and put her face in her hands. She didn’t know what to do, but it killed her every time Harry went out the door to work. She never knew when he would come home. Better yet, she didn’t know if he would come home. Brianne’s dirty blond hair fell in front of her face as she thought about what to say next. Harry stood up, and walked across the wood floor, and knelt beside his wife.

Brianne looked up at Harry as she felt his hand on her shoulder. Her face was a bright red, and her eyes looked as if she were about to cry. Her heart pounded against her throat, and Bree felt as if she was going to choke on air. The words that were about to come out of her mouth burned in her throat.

“M-maybe we should get a divorce,” she said slowly.

The world stopped. Harry nearly fell backwards at Bree’s choice of words. They cut through him like a stake cuts a vampire. His green eyes looked up into brown ones as Harry pushed his glasses up on his face.

“Bree, please tell me you aren’t serious,” Harry begged her.

“Harry, how can you call me your wife when you never see me? It isn’t fair to me or to the kids.”

“I promise I’ll change. I’ll quit work if you really want me to. Just please, don’t leave me.”

“I’m sorry Harry,” Brianne said as she looked away from him.

Tears fell from Brianne’s eyes as she said these words to him. It was the most she had spoken to him on over a month, and though they sent owls to each other, it wasn’t enough. Brianne looked up when she heard one of the stairs creek. Lily had heard the whole thing. Tears fell down Lily’s cheeks as well as she ran up the stairs and into her room. Lily slammed her door shut, and plopped onto her bed. She hugged her pillow tightly, and sobbed into it.




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[info]paperteacup
2009-02-16 02:22 am UTC (link)
I can't think of anything more intelligent to say than dsjfdsjffjkhdffuckingTwilightfddfddsf

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[info]malinbe
2009-02-16 03:04 am UTC (link)
Yasuke!! *loves icon*

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(no subject) - [info]paperteacup, 2009-02-16 03:06 am UTC
(no subject) - [info]malinbe, 2009-02-16 03:19 am UTC
(no subject) - [info]paperteacup, 2009-02-16 03:24 am UTC

[info]winterlarks
2009-02-16 02:32 am UTC (link)
Daaaisy, Daaaisy. Give me your answer pleeeasse.

Draco and Pansy would NEVER name their child Daisy. NEVER EVER EVER. She'd get a traditional constellation name, more likely. Cassiopeia or something.

...I hate Twilight. *grumbles*

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[info]winterlarks
2009-02-16 02:33 am UTC (link)
...Now I look like a hypocrite. XD The Bella icon is for a mocking roleplay of Twilight. No worries.

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(no subject) - [info]bunnyinthemoon, 2009-02-16 02:37 am UTC
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(no subject) - [info]winterlarks, 2009-02-16 03:17 am UTC
(no subject) - [info]angakkuq_01, 2009-02-16 06:08 am UTC
(no subject) - [info]bandazgeek, 2009-02-16 06:11 pm UTC
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(no subject) - [info]bandazgeek, 2009-02-16 06:15 pm UTC

[info]bunnyinthemoon
2009-02-16 02:34 am UTC (link)
Wow, a Mary-sue named Brianne. I never thought I'd see my friend's name become a Mary-sue name. But now I'll be picturing my friend in place of this Death Eater Harry-wife sue. Which makes the story a lot more amusing. :3

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[info]ellid
2009-02-16 02:35 am UTC (link)
One hopes that the Cullen of the Month disavows the family vow of vegetarianism and eats her.

And then is picketed by PETA.

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[info]cyniconvention
2009-02-16 02:41 am UTC (link)
Oh yay, another SPECIAL POWERS! person.

They cut through him like a stake cuts a vampire.

They did that on purpose, didn't they?

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[info]little_masaouki
2009-02-16 04:29 am UTC (link)
Your icon is awesome!

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(no subject) - [info]cyniconvention, 2009-02-16 07:13 pm UTC
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[info]catatonicjoy
2009-02-16 02:43 am UTC (link)


Voldemort didn't die, he was just "weakened", and his daughter, and granddaughter are Death Eaters.

I read that as "weekending".... in Majorca

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[info]ladysugarquill
2009-02-16 02:49 am UTC (link)
THIS. IS. POINTLESS.

UGH.

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[info]miss_mercurial
2009-02-16 04:23 am UTC (link)
Icon love! *glomps you for the awesome that is your icon*
Not that I'm a hunormous Buffy fan or anything....*smiles*

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[info]feuillu
2009-02-16 02:52 am UTC (link)
WHY ARE THEY MARRIED IN THE FIRST PLACE.

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[info]angakkuq_01
2009-02-16 02:59 am UTC (link)
I know--why would Harry marry anyone related to the man who murdered his parents?

Oh. Wait. The typist wanted to have someone related to Harry who could still speak Parseltongue.

*headdesk*

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(no subject) - [info]little_masaouki, 2009-02-16 03:25 am UTC
(no subject) - [info]angakkuq_01, 2009-02-16 03:26 am UTC
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[info]malinbe
2009-02-16 03:02 am UTC (link)
Yes! I ship Lily/Renesemee! They are perfect for each other: both are annoying spawn with special powers that don't seem to have any logical explanation!

How would Harry miss something as big as his wife and daughter being Death Eaters? He's not stupid. Oh, wait... if this Harry was stupid enough to marry Voldemort's spawn, maybe he can miss the fact that she's daddy's supporter too. Quite obviously he was highly drugged at some point in the past, possibly right after they murdered everyone Harry ever had a relationship with, since they would have alerted him of his odd behaviour.

I swear I try, but no, I can't find where the logic is.

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[info]little_masaouki
2009-02-16 03:26 am UTC (link)
Particularly since he's obviously still having sex with his wife if he knocked her up. A Dark Mark is pretty hard to hide when you're naked.

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(no subject) - [info]missblackheart7, 2009-02-16 01:02 pm UTC

[info]darth_gojira
2009-02-16 03:03 am UTC (link)
So it's a Sue daughter of a Sue?

And Voldemort had a daughter?

And Voldemort is still alive and Harry's not doing anything about it?

And Voldemort retires instead of gaining ultimate revenge?

And Harry marries Voldemort's evil daughter?

And it's a Twilight crossover?

And everyone's okay with this? DID I MISS SOMETHING?!


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[info]midoriri
2009-02-16 07:52 am UTC (link)
Lion King reference FTW.

In short...this fiiiiiic...is doooooommmmmed....

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(no subject) - [info]darth_gojira, 2009-02-17 03:18 am UTC

[info]hat_fm
2009-02-16 03:11 am UTC (link)
There is just so many things wrong with this. The fact that it's a Twilight crossover is just the icing on the Fail-cake.

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[info]bellereve_
2009-02-16 03:13 am UTC (link)
She might be paired with Renesemee? That's kinda funny, in a really retarded way.

Also, the opening line struck me as funny because, um, no, I wouldn't. Expectations and paparazzi and all that.

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[info]bellereve_
2009-02-16 03:21 am UTC (link)
Also:

She didn’t know what to do, but it killed her every time Harry went out the door to work. She never knew when he would come home. Better yet, she didn’t know if he would come home.

WELL THEN MAYBE YOU SHOULD STOP WORKING FOR VOLDEMORT AND MAKING HIS JOB HARDER.


Gah, Earth Logic, where art thou?

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[info]fl_brightside
2009-02-16 03:36 am UTC (link)
"You would think that being the daughter to the Boy Who Lived was all fun and games wouldn’t you? Well, no, unfortunately, it wasn’t. You see, Harry never married Ginny Weasley. Instead, he married a woman named Brianne Riddle. Yes, that’s correct…Brianne Riddle." should I state the wtf quotient of this paragraph or is it obvious?

So Lily sat up in her room. It was dressed up in Slytherin colors... oy vey, seriously, does anybody in real life based their room around their school color's? Mine's is gray - somehow walking to a bland room of grayness everyday seems mighty unappealing

"While Voldemort did not die, he was still very weak. As Head Auror, it was Harry’s objective to catch any of the Death Eaters that had escaped Azkaban, and were starting trouble. This drove Brianne insane. That was mostly due to the fact that she was one of those Death Eaters, as was her daughter, Lily. Lily was seen as Lord Voldemort’s gem, and he often called upon her for assignments and missions." Even if it was his granddaughter - I don't see Potterspawn being something Voldemort would approve of. I imagine him crucio-ing the Sue at birth, then her mother for mating with Harry. Repeatedly. Speaking of which, WHY would she be with Harry if she's Voldie's daughter - she should've expected Harry to want Voldemort brought into justice since he kinda-sorta killed his parents and made his life miserable for the most part.


"Seeing as how Lily’s father was Harry Potter, people expected great things from her." James and Lily, and Harry were all powerful wizards and nobody expected anything from him. They certainly didn't give him extra Charms for being The-Boy-Who-Lived

"She was one of the most loved and hated students in Hogwarts..." I thought she had trouble making friends - implying she's one of the most loved, implies that as much people like her as they do had her.

"She excelled in pretty much everything." *coughs*soundthesuealarms!*coughs*

"Lily sat up on her green and black bed reading her Charms book." Black's not a Slytherin color. Unless she's one of those omg-i'm-so-speshul-i-confused-alberto-and-he-put-me-in-2-houses and she's also a Hufflepuff; then she's contradicting herself. Again.


Gosh, this Mercury Logic Sue gave me a headache

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[info]little_masaouki
2009-02-16 03:36 am UTC (link)
I love the fact that they act like Voldemort isn't that big a deal. I read their fight and it sounds like a police officer arguing with his wife about her no-good brother doing petty crime. We're talking about the man who is destined to kill Harry and she expects him to just stop fighting him? It's kind of a big deal.

I also love the fact that Voldemort is casually stepping down to give rule to his two daughters because he thinks they can do better. Really? Voldemort the "I am the greatest wizard ever, and I will live forever" is just going to give this all up.

Also, insert the standard generic rant about Voldemort even having children or using the name Riddle.

Anyway, here are some highlights.

They cut through him like a stake cuts a vampire.

Okay, ignoring the bad pun-forshadowing of this line, in most lore it's not easy to stake a vampire. In face, most lore indicates that you need a hammer to slam it in. Also, a stake doesn't cut. It pierces.

Well, Brianne inherited the house, and about 95% of the things in it were hers.

I love when fics have people inherit things from Voldemort. You don't think that that stuff might possibly get confiscated?

Kreacher went to go work for Lord Voldemort.

Last I checked, house elves can't give two weeks notice.

"Potthead Potter"

Wow, Bellona is really immature considering she must be somewhere in her 30's at least.

“I never liked him, but you being married to him proved to be helpful,” Lord Voldemort said.

I love this line. It brings back my "slippers and pipe, while reading a newspaper" image of Voldemort, complaining about how "that Potter kid is nothing but trouble." I mean, really? Voldemort never liked the boy who has apparently stripped him of his power a total of four times, and is destined to kill him? Get out of town!

“I am not letting you go to America alone Lily. There are way too many muggles. You could accidently expose the wizarding world,”

This is also extremely funny to me. Last I checked England was full of muggles too. But I just love the imagery that this is something she is likely to do.

Lily walked inside, and found the closest map she could find. A globe would have been better, but Lord Voldemort did not have one.

So Voldemort does not have a globe, but he has a map of America?

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[info]midoriri
2009-02-16 05:05 am UTC (link)
Okay, ignoring the bad pun-forshadowing of this line, in most lore it's not easy to stake a vampire. In face, most lore indicates that you need a hammer to slam it in. Also, a stake doesn't cut. It pierces.

That and it's harder than hell to stake them while they're awake and mving-they have to be in their coffins, sleeping. They won't take being staked lying down, pardon the pun. ;)
(And unless my very-basic vampire knowledge fails me, it's also best to, after staking them, cut off their heads and fill their mouths with garlic. Maybe place a crucifix on them, too...)

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(no subject) - [info]little_masaouki, 2009-02-16 04:06 pm UTC
(no subject) - [info]judetwee, 2009-02-16 03:29 pm UTC
On the subject of things that are Wrong and Should Not Happen:
[info]ingriam
2009-02-16 03:45 am UTC (link)
Someone please yell at me for having this idea:
This is what comes of me watching Kamen Rider Dragon Knight and then reading Twilight rants; bad, wrong messed up ideas.

And I am telling you now, brain: I will not write a story where Bella Whatsherface from Twilight ends up becoming Kamen Rider Dragon Knight, then ends up fawning over Wing Knight and Torque the way she fawns over Edward. Just, no.

Vent her, Torque! VENT HER!

In other news, the sporking was very funny; I'm sure the cliched little emo-Sue - gah, she sounds just like Bella Whatsherface - will find TWU WUV before long. 9_9

Edited at 2009-02-16 03:46 am UTC

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[info]ennta
2009-02-16 04:06 am UTC (link)
Is it too much to hope that, immediately upon arriving in Forks, Lily is disemboweled by werewolves?

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[info]little_masaouki
2009-02-16 04:28 am UTC (link)
No, that seems unlikely. If what I've been told is true (I've never read the books, just had them summarized by a friend), the werewolves are dormant until a vampire is nearby at which point their werewolf genes kick in and they gain the ability to shape shift.

So she'll be attacked by a different tribe of Native Americans who's latent merman genes kick in when they detect a sue threatening their people.

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(no subject) - [info]ennta, 2009-02-16 04:50 am UTC
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[info]miss_mercurial
2009-02-16 04:49 am UTC (link)
NOOOOOO! Get away from my Great-Grandmother's name, you horrid Sue; she was a freaking amazing lady and would totally kick your Sue ass for bringing deihonor to her lovely name. (Lily Evans-Potter she would have loved.) That aside- I could actually see this being well-done, provided the following:
1. No Twilight crossover. (Duh.)
2. Voldemort is still dead. Does "neither can live while the other survives" ring a bell? That's what I thought.
3. His daughter, instead of a wannabe Death Eater, has done her best to distance herself from her family history and her father's actions by becoming a genuinely good person. That kind of girl, I could see Harry going for. The one in the actual fic? Never in a zillion years.
4. The daughter was a believable character rather than OMG! So perfct! Like, wow!
As it is, it is a sandwich of the Salami of Suckage and the Lettuce of Lame, built on the Bread of Badness and smeared with the Mayo of Mediocrity and the Mustard of Mary-Suedom. (Alliteration. Ain't it Awesome?) *smiles*

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[info]little_masaouki
2009-02-16 04:09 pm UTC (link)
So in other words change absolutely everything.

Seriously though you have a point, and the funny part is that means that a background concept from this fic could be more interesting than everything else in it.

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(no subject) - [info]clichealert, 2009-02-16 05:09 pm UTC

[info]kh_mattie
2009-02-16 05:26 am UTC (link)
You would think that being the daughter to the Boy Who Lived was all fun and games wouldn’t you?

Actually no, I wouldn't think that at all. Did we read the same series? You know, the one with the boy who was neglected/abused by his family after his real parents were murdered, then ridiculed and mocked during school for being "The Chosen One" before finally joining in a war that kills a good amount of his friends and family? That series??


Oh, and this cannot be said enough: TWILIGHT I HATE YOU. I REALLY FUCKING DO.

Edited at 2009-02-16 05:26 am UTC

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(Anonymous)
2009-02-16 03:59 pm UTC (link)
Severely screwed up canon? Check.
Omgidontfitinanywherebecausei'mtoospeshulANGST: Check.
Gigantic plot holes for children: Check.
Exepctionally crap storyline and characters:
I think Smeyer may be trying her hand at fanfiction.

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[info]jasmine_signet
2009-02-16 11:27 am UTC (link)
...
BWAHAHAHAHAHAHA.

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[info]stormswift
2009-02-16 01:54 pm UTC (link)
Look where they ended up…dead and in Azkaban.

Putting the corpses in Azkaban seems unnecessary to me.

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[info]little_masaouki
2009-02-16 04:10 pm UTC (link)
Didnt' you hear? With the dementors gone, they replaced them with Inferi.

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[info]clichealert
2009-02-16 05:14 pm UTC (link)
Look where they ended up…dead and in Azkaban.

That sounds like death is worse than just going to prison. Is Azkaban that terrible?

It also reminds me of this from a Genie manual.

"Failure to obey the rules and regulations will result in DEATH! or injury."

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[info]leikomgwtfbbq
2009-02-16 08:30 pm UTC (link)
I once had a friend named Brianne. When she grew up, she wanted to run our local semipro baseball team.

...Yeah. That's all I got.

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[info]little_masaouki
2009-02-17 03:22 pm UTC (link)
I just had to comment again, because I failed to mention my favorite part in my last rant.

I just love the fact that Harry acts like being a Death Eater isn't that big a deal. Like it's a carreer path he'd prefer them not to take, like a mother who wanted their child to become a doctor but they want to be a computer programmer or something.

Hell, Voldemort in general is treated this way. Bree has no problems taking over a force that is dynamically opposed to her "I'm leaving because I love you too much to stay" estranged husband, and probably still is required to kill him. Everybody acts like Voldemort is nothing more than a mob boss. Even Harry wants to take him down, but doesn't seem to think that he's really that big a deal.

There is no way Harry would ever just go "I drove you to this" and accept that his wife and his daughter are now Death Eaters. He would be furious. It's hard to say what he would do to his wife, he might arrest her, but more likely he'd let her go considering he's trying to rebuild their relationship. But there's no way he's going to leave his daughter with her to let her continue this life. He would take her, with an army of aurors if necessary, and send her far away, preferably with some Weasleys to keep her safe, so that her mother and Voldemort could never find her again.

I'd say he'd then have to convince her that Voldemort's beliefs are wrong, but like most of these fics, but the character's personality doesn't line up with her following them in the first place. This is kind of a big deal, considering that she was raised by Harry. We've seen no signs of blood purist mentallity in her, no contempt for society and it's weakness or anything. A classic "Show don't tell" situation. If you took out the lines that simply state "she's a death eater" and one line about her "running missions for Voldemort" than you'd have no clue that she would chose to follow Voldemort, and probably think that she'd oppose him.

Now I'm thinking of Harry and Bree fighting like a cross-religion couple arguing over how they're going to raise their daughter.

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[info]curlychikk
2009-02-20 01:02 am UTC (link)
BELLONA?

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(Anonymous)
2009-07-04 02:55 pm UTC (link)
How can one end up dead AND in Azkaban?! ROFL.

"They cut through him like a stake cuts a vampire."
^ I SEE WHAT YOU DID THERE. ._.

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