pottersues: TITLE: Could a Wizard Ever Fall in Love

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pottersues) wrote,
@ 2008-12-26 21:36:00

Current mood:	rushed
Current music:	Underworld
Entry tags:	toxic, vampire, you-sue

TITLE: Could a Wizard Ever Fall in Love With a Vampire?? a Harry Potter story grlz only
PERPETRATOR: danshollywoodgrl12
SUE-O-METER: (toxic)

FULL NAME: Raylene aka you
SPECIES: vampire/witch
HAIR: "dark brown hair that almost exactly matched her eyes"
EYES: dark brown
MARKINGS: she is tan and skinny.
POSSESSIONS: a BFF named Ashley who is "close friends" with Harry Potter.

ORIGIN: "Your mother had been a vampire and your dad had been a witch." Interesting. Your parents were Death Eaters, who were killed for abandoning Voldemort and fleeing to America. You live with your grandparents in England and are transferring from Beauxbatons to Hogwarts.
CONNECTIONS TO CANON: "There has been a Phrophecy made about you Harry and Voldemort. You have never tasted blood so you can be in the sun as long as you want but the minute you taste blood you will not be able to go in the sun. The prophecy says that you will be pretty much bait to lure Harry to meet Voldemort. And then you and him will have the truest love. You will draw harrys blood as the first love you will ever taste. Voldeemort will be torturing Harry and when he gets close to dieing you will save his life and for that will be made to die in sunlight. If it is really true love between you and Harrythe out come of the final battle will be wonderful. But if it is not true love the out come will be regretful." What the hell sort of prophecy is that? She tells Harry and it's practically love at first sight.
SPECIAL ABILITIES: Can go out in the sunlight until she tastes blood.

NOTES: Wow, with a plot like this I don't even want to know why it goes to chapter 19!

SAMPLE:

"Raylene! Come on time to go to Diagon Alley!" you were at Ashley's house your dads parents were happy to get rid of you. "COMING!" you screamed back as a reply. You were soon wandering around Diagon Alley with Ashley who was looking for Harry, Ron, and Hermione. You were told in a letter from Dumbledore that you were responsable for telling Harry of the prophecy. You had only told Ashley and you had long since finished shopping all that was left was for you to tell Harry of the prophecy. "Ashley!" you heard a voice call from behind. You both turned to see Harry, ron, and Hermione. Ashley- " Hey Guys! are you up for lunch there is somthing important we need to tell you. You were introduced to the three of them and lead to the leaky Calodron. You sat down and noticed that Harry was even more handsom in person. Hermione- "so whats up?" Raylene-" well you all know about the prophecy of the final battle. and just to let you know I find no pleasure in telling you this..." You explained everything about the prophecy and looked at the faces of the people across from you. Hermione was glaring at you, Ron seemed confused , and Harry looked sad. Raylene-" I'm so sorry
I wish this had never happened." in your mind you already knew that you had fallen for Harry. You just hoped he wouldn't fall for you. Harry-" I hate how my life is already planned out for me." Raylene-" It really does suck." Harry-"yeah." Raylene-" there is a way of getting out of this. You just can't fall for me."
Harry-" how about you not fall for me?" Raylene-" to late for that." Hermione-" are you always this open?" Raylene-" most of the time."

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	finding_jay 2008-12-28 03:41 am UTC (link)
	Your mother had been a vampire and your dad had been a witch. So not only did they solve the problem of deceased ovum, but now they have created viable sperm for ftms! ETA: Hooray, first. Edited at 2008-12-28 03:42 am UTC (Reply to this)

	cesaretech 2008-12-28 03:42 am UTC (link)
	Your mother had been a vampire and your dad had been a witch. You're doing it wrong. With a prophecy like that, who needs free will? Fall in love, or die. (Reply to this) (Thread)

	rowenaraven13 2008-12-28 05:14 am UTC (link)
	Holy hell, I didn't even pick up on that the first time. I mean, I noticed that the sentence structure was pathetic, but . . . this reminds me of the time I talked too fast and asked my mother when we were going to Uncle June's and Aunt Ed's house. (Reply to this) (Parent)

	historyblitz 2008-12-28 03:48 am UTC (link)
	Hermoine: Are you always this stupid? Raylene: Most of the time. (Reply to this)

	lovely_joy 2008-12-28 04:15 am UTC (link)
	Dark brown hair and eyes? Tanned and skinny? Oh no, this abomination actually looks like me. And it's a you Sue, God =_=, I am SO not flattered. I have to admit, though, it's weird to find a Sue whose hair isn't golden as a wheat field in a warm spring afternoon and whose eyes aren't the brighest blue, with flecks of silver and gold... (Reply to this) (Thread)

	lostmustard 2008-12-28 04:16 am UTC (link)
	You poor dear offers comfort food of your choice (Reply to this) (Parent)

	lostmustard 2008-12-28 04:16 am UTC (link)
	It's nice to see that the wizarding world is against Prop 8. (Reply to this)

	rodentfanatic 2008-12-28 04:21 am UTC (link)
	Well, it's an interesting take with the blood/sun issue, I guess. Dumb, yes, but I've never seen it used before. And at least she doesn't SPARKLE. (Reply to this) (Thread)

	burninglikeice 2008-12-28 04:24 am UTC (link)
	I was thinking that it was sort of creative, as well. (Reply to this) (Parent)

	burninglikeice 2008-12-28 04:22 am UTC (link)
	Search Quizilla Search GO That sounds like something from Power Rangers. "Megazord! Search Quizilla Search Go attack number 7!" (Reply to this) (Thread)

	lostmustard 2008-12-28 04:37 am UTC (link)
	With 19 chapters and the plot moving so quickly, that could very well be a part of the story. It'll turn out that Harry is the Red Ranger, Ron is the Black Ranger, Hermione is the Blue Ranger, Rayne is the Pink Ranger, and Ashley is the Yellow Ranger. And Voldemort'll team up with Rita Repulsa and Lord Zedd. "Magic wand, make my Blast-Ended Skrewt GROW!" (Reply to this) (Parent)(Thread)

	geekycanadian86 2008-12-28 05:06 am UTC (link)
	I don't know about any of you, but I'm not tan or skinny, and I don't have brown eyes or hair. And I certainly don't have a BFF named Ashley. And Raylene is a weird name. (Reply to this) (Thread)

	rowenaraven13 2008-12-28 05:12 am UTC (link)
	So is Renesmee. And I'm willing to bet this was put together the same way. Probably the parents were Raymond and Charlene. Edited at 2008-12-28 05:16 am UTC (Reply to this) (Parent)(Thread)

	hsvh 2008-12-28 05:06 am UTC (link)
	Your mother had been a vampire and your dad had been a witch. Anyone wanna bet her father's name is Shirley? (Reply to this) (Thread)

	geekycanadian86 2008-12-28 06:03 am UTC (link)
	giggles (Reply to this) (Parent)

	rowenaraven13 2008-12-28 05:24 am UTC (link)
	When I'm driving, I expect other drivers to pick a lane and stick with it. When I'm reading, I expect writers to pick a tense and stick with it. (Reply to this) (Thread)

	geekycanadian86 2008-12-28 05:28 am UTC (link)
	le gasp! But that would make sense ! (Reply to this) (Parent)(Thread)

	rowenaraven13 2008-12-28 05:33 am UTC (link)
	Harry-" I have a firbolt." Raylene-" I'll be with Ashley." Harry-" you'll never catch up to my FireBolt." Raylene-" I bought Ashley and me each a firebolt." Keep spelling it different ways and the law of averages says you'll eventually get it right. (Reply to this) (Thread)

	mondayagain 2008-12-29 08:36 am UTC (link)
	Win. (Reply to this) (Parent)

	rowenaraven13 2008-12-28 05:56 am UTC (link)
	Even if it's supposed to be a script format - aside from the obvious question, Why? - there's such a thing as giving every line it's own . . . uh, line. I can just see Equus if the script were written like this. Edited at 2008-12-28 05:57 am UTC (Reply to this) (Parent)(Thread)

	mranon_y_mous 2008-12-28 07:28 am UTC (link)
	Her dad is a women. Could the female version of m-preg be called fem-preg? (Reply to this) (Thread)

	rowenaraven13 2008-12-28 07:37 am UTC (link)
	I think fem-preg would just be . . . preg. But if he's a cross-dresser or had an . . . operation . . . it makes it kind of like a Zen koan. "If a man washes a dish and no woman is there to see it, is it still clean?" (Reply to this) (Parent)(Thread)

	sandkitty 2008-12-28 08:34 am UTC (link)
	Yay, a You-Sue that kind of looks like me instead of an idealized version of the Suethor. Woot. (Reply to this) (Thread)

	sandkitty 2008-12-28 08:36 am UTC (link)
	Wait, that's not a good thing. Anyone have a gun? (Reply to this) (Parent)

	quadrifons 2008-12-28 12:53 pm UTC (link)
	to the leaky Calodron, where the spectacle of Sues fighting each other to the death or being devoured by Skrewts amuses Wizards and Muggles alike. ARE YOU NOT ENTERTAINED?? ...okay, I need to go to bed now. (Reply to this)

	darth_gojira 2008-12-28 02:42 pm UTC (link)
	"grzl only" As much as I appreciate the warning to run away as far as I can, I really don't think girls are suited for this, being human beings and all. Maybe it's safe for cnidarians, but I think it would insult their intelligence. To quote the immortal Tom Sevo: AAAAAAAAAAAGGGHHHH!!! (Reply to this)

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	(Anonymous) 2008-12-29 12:47 am UTC (link)
	"He was in a some black jeans and a black shirt that said Linkin Park on it, Linkin Park was my personal favorite band, it was american and just like I liked it." I'm not sure why, but that quote made me laugh out loud for about a minute. Maybe I've finally snapped from all the Sueage. (Reply to this) (Parent)

	hollaback_rich 2008-12-28 03:40 pm UTC (link)
	Raylene makes me think of baleen, for some reason. Which then makes me think of the whale from Finding Nemo. I doubt that's what the Suethor had in mind when she named her, though. O.G. (Reply to this)

	clichealert 2008-12-28 04:08 pm UTC (link)
	Phrophecy, my new favorite word. (Reply to this) (Thread)

	rowenaraven13 2008-12-28 08:25 pm UTC (link)
	I can just hear Sylvester Cat saying it. (Reply to this) (Parent)

	malinbe 2008-12-28 07:09 pm UTC (link)
	I have learnt my lesson: if you are feeling nauseous, don't read about a Sue labeled "toxic". malinbe- " i hav learnt I have" (Reply to this) (Thread)

	darth_gojira 2008-12-29 02:29 am UTC (link)
	The title should be read "RUN! SAVE YOURSELF BEFORE IT'S TOO LATE!" (Reply to this) (Parent)

	ryahhime 2008-12-29 04:18 am UTC (link)
	And then you and him will have the truest love. I... I love how blissfully happy that sentiment is. I can just imagine the Suethor skipping through fields of sunshine while singing about her "truest" love. It... it's strangely endearing... has taken too much cold medicine (Reply to this)

	shmeiliarockie 2008-12-29 05:40 am UTC (link)
	With all the character names followed by hyphens, I imagined the "camera" of the story whipping violently from one person to the next. And I hate You-Sues, but by now I've beat that dead horse into a fine, fine powder. (Reply to this)

	lonewolf_eburg 2008-12-29 01:08 pm UTC (link)
	"The prophecy says that you will be pretty much bait to lure Harry to meet Voldemort. And then you and him will have the truest love." There's some ambiguity in that sentence. Will the true love be between Voldemort and the Sue, or Harry and the Sue? And lol at the prophecy, prophecies like that basically get rid of any suspence by telling the plot pf the story beforehand. (Reply to this)

	(Anonymous) 2008-12-29 02:35 pm UTC (link)
	Ive come to this conclusion, you need a new rating. Quizilla. Because clearly that website is way to toxic for its own good. Since these people seem to practically reak of troll but not be, and they are almost all in Quizilla they should just get a rating to themselves... I am mostly joking about this. Mostly. (Reply to this)