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3460: A Forbiden Love Story - Hermione Granger/Emily Bellatrix Riddle & Draco Malfoy
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TITLE: A Forbiden Love Story
PERPETRATOR: JANEVOLTURIJANE VOLTURI
SUE-O-METER: AWFUL (awful)
COVER/BANNER ART: The story has a picture of Draco from the movies for the cover.
SUMMARY:”What if during seventh year, Draco decides to tell Hermione the truth about her past. How will she react when she finds out that she is the daughter of the Dark Lord and a Death Eater? How will everyone else all react once she tells them the truth? Will the three best friends still be best friends? Or will Ron try to kill her after all these years? Read and Review!”
FULL NAME: Hermione Granger/Emily Bellatrix Riddle and Draco Malfoy
SPECIES: Hermione is Voldemort's daughter.
HAIR: n/a
EYES: n/a
MARKINGS: n/a
POSSESSIONS: n/a
CONNECTION TO CANON: The first chapter is Draco and Hermione flirting with each other in Gryffindor tower. Ron overhears and gets pissed off in the next chapter and she gets into a fight with Pansey. The third chapter is an author's note about not being able to update.
ORIGIN: The summary sums everything up. I'm under the impression Hermione is also Draco's cousin, but I don't know if the writer thought about that.
SPECIAL ABILITIES: Hermione has a split personality in her sleep which Draco talks to.

NOTES: I've featured this writer before. They wrote “Prince of Arendelle Returning Home”. I'm afraid the writer is using a sock puppet on said story to boost their self esteem rather then taking the criticism they receive on their stories seriously.

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3459: Lyra Riddle - Lyra Riddle
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TITLE: Lyra Riddle
PERPETRATOR: DAMNINEEDANAME
SUE-O-METER: AWFUL (awful)
COVER/BANNER ART: Here avatar is a picture of a girl in black and white with red lips.
SUMMARY:”I have long lived a life of lies and betrayal. I am the Dark Lord's unknown daughter. My name is Lyra Riddle. And I seek the truth.” and ”Tom Riddle, commonly known as he-who-must-not-be-named did not know about the legacy he left behind seventeen years ago. But his past will catch up with him. When Lyra finds him, the true impact of her idea becomes something unforeseen, something dangerous. Some people are trying to take advantage of Lyra's state of condition, especially Bellatrix Lestrange developes a curious interest for the new girl that is Lord Voldemort's daughter.”
FULL NAME: Lyra Riddle
SPECIES: Voldemort's daughter
HAIR: n/a
EYES: At one point her eyes are described as dark.
MARKINGS: n/a
POSSESSIONS: She has a mysterious past.
CONNECTION TO CANON: This story is supposed to take place Harry's final year. The first chapter opens up with a very weird POV piece from the OC and then moves to her walking through a villiage getting hit on by some weird guy. Somehow she ends up at the Three Broomsticks. She's offered a drink and she flat out says she wants to find Voldemort. She's asked if she wants to become a death eater. (I guess “natter” would be a good way to describe this fic.) Apparently she's talking to Yaxley. The conversation lasts more through more then one chapter, but then I realized the OC jumped to Hogwarts. I'm not sure how.
ORIGIN: “Hey everyone! Welcome to another Fanfiction, in case you read any of my previous ones. Make sure to read my warnings because there will be Bellatrix and OC interaction (you know I love Bella!) however, this one will be a bit different. On any note, you don't have to read my previous FFs in order to understand this one. I'd be glad if you did, though! Enjoy your stay and please review every once in a while, that never demotivated anyone!” The writer warns about the work containing non-con.
SPECIAL ABILITIES: She's somehow Voldemort's daughter. She somehow walks into Hogsmede unnoticed. She's apparently had no introduction to the Wizarding world prior to the first chapter.

NOTES: The story is painful to read. I'm not sure exactly what it is that makes this one painful other then I know it's poorly written.

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3458: Consequences - Hermione Granger
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Here is day one of Voldemort's daughter's week.

TITLE: Consequences
PERPETRATOR: Saoirse-Roisin-Dubh
SUE-O-METER: TOXIC (toxic)
COVER/BANNER ART: Their avatar is a picture of a medieval dress in Hufflepuff on the left. On the right at the bottom is the Hufflepuff crest. On top is piece of jewelry in the shape of a badger.
SUMMARY:”I was done. First two-thirds of the Golden Trio, then my parents. And now what do I do. Wait, Voldemort why are you here? Hermione/Voldemort Father/daughter story of heartbreak, betrayal, and their consequences. Disclaimer in A/N inside”
FULL NAME: Hermione Granger
SPECIES: She's Voldemort's daughter via adoption.
HAIR: She can change it at will.
EYES:MARKINGS:</b> Hermione is approaching her fifteenth birthday. “My skin was pale, but not sickly or porcelain as I first assumed. It had a slight rose tinge to it. My black eyes had small hints of violet and gold and were more of an onyx than a obsidian black. My black hair fell to just above my butt, and wavy, but seemed more straight than anything else. I had grown to be 5' 8" and my breasts had filled out. My B cup had filled out to a D. My shameful curves had become more prominent, giving me hips and a nice butt.”
POSSESSIONS: “Pack up every last thing with that freaky bag of yours- including your furniture- and leave.” How does her mother know? “Prophesor McGonagall helped me enchant it in third year so I could stop using that annoyingly heavy bookbag.” “I pulled out my mp3 player that I had gotten to work around magic and clicked on the first song I saw, singling softly as it played.” Chapter three is her overblown inheritance. Chapter four is the room given to her by Voldemort. Said room is also overblown wish fufillment.
CONNECTION TO CANON: The story starts off with Hermione's mother kicking her out of the house. Hermione's stops and has a good cry while listening to her mp3 player. She is approached by Voldemort and she doesn't react in a negative manner. “... I just wanted to feel a connection to something in my world right now.” He asks her if she is “You are Miss Granger, are you not?” She says, “I am not. My parents disowned me and kicked me out. I am just Hermione.” She brags about not fearing his name. She's willing to tell him everything. She gives him her sob story. (See origins.) In the first chapter she joins up with him so Muggleborns won't be ill treated and they plan on changing the dark mark. She also is the one to suggest he adopts her. They walk right into Gringotts to perform the adoption. Chapter five is her acting like a spoiled brat. I couldn't read past the fifth chapter. (The song lyrics splattered through the chapters doesn't help.”
ORIGIN: Everybody can sense Hermione is the daughter of Voldemort. They decide she's changed despite the fact she hasn't changed. They call her a freak and ostracize her. “I started at the beginning. When I was three and I turned my hair bubblegum pink, then electric blue through a temper tantrum. Seven, I made books fly to me from high shelves. Then the beatings started. My nanny would beat me, but never my parents. And they never asked about the crying, the bruises, or the blood. Nine, when bullies ganged up on me and beat me to within an inch of my life, and three days later I was fine. Then the insults. My mom muttering things about me under her breath. Eleven, my escapades with Harry and Ron, my misfitness. The troll I took down by muttering Wingardium Leviosa as I saw Ron's wouldn't work. The night before leaving for Christmas completing the obstacle course for the stone and resetting everything. Twelve, In a library reading about snakes and parseltongue. Finding horcruxes and making the connection but was petrified and Ron groped me. So did Dean and Seamus. Thirteen, I was shunned. I was not seen as a girl, with feelings, but as a tool for homework help. Hagrid, Malfoy, Sirius, Lupin, the Dementors. Fourteen, this morning, the ugly confrontation and my magic swirling as I packed and ran out the door, looking back as my parents yelled I was disowned and I answered with a rude hand gesture and a "go to Hell". Tom withdrew from my mind, seething.”
SPECIAL ABILITIES: “I stopped singing and just listened, realizing I was being watched from behind me. I threw my magic out at whatever it was, and realized it was a wizard. His magic was dark, but concerned. It worried me. Suddenly, a deep baritone voice started singing the song I had played.” Here is why Voldemort should believe her. “"Because I took down a fully grown mountain troll first year. Because I figured out every challenge of the Philosopher's Stone months before anyone, and how to reset them. Because I figured out your pet second year. Because I know an animagus and a werewolf when I see one. and because you will me in my mind and my mind has survived no less than twelve attacks from Snape and Dumbledore simultaneously." “Riddles are blessed with eidetice memories. I learn it once or twice, and I'm good.” (Hermione shouldn't have this ability.

NOTES: Here is a quote from the author's note at the end of the first chapter. “All characters, items, quotes, however off-canon, belong to the darling Queen, J.K. Rowling.” Second chapter - “I just kidnapped them and used compulsion charms to make them do what I wanted for the story.” Here is a quote form chapter two. “uuuhm... Sounds good! Couldnt it just have been an OC, though? Hermione has undergone a complete make over!”

I also found this on the writer's profile. “Also! For Consequences, if the time line confuses you, let me know! I'll pm you the timeline. If enough people ask, I'll post the timeline on the following chapter. Thanks everyone!” I also found this. “Note: I've let my sisters have control of my other two stories. Unfortunately, they slack worse than me. Therefore, I will be trying to update them, but the updates may feel forced and labored; I've lost inspiration for the stories.”

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3457: A Ravenclaw Life - Severus Ellen Snape
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Here is the last day for “Don't Like, Don't Read”.

TITLE: A Ravenclaw Life
PERPETRATOR: SeptinaStar
SUE-O-METER: Toxic
COVER/BANNER ART: Their avatar is a sunset or sunrise in red tones.
SUMMARY:”FEMALE SEVERUS. Don't Like, Don't Read. Under threat from Tobias Snape, Severus begs for a sorting that will change her life's path. AU A new chapter has been added. Be amazed. Be very amazed.”
FULL NAME: Severus Ellen Snape
SPECIES: See the rest of the entry.
HAIR: n/a
EYES: n/a
MARKINGS: n/a
POSSESSIONS:
CONNECTION TO CANON: The first chapter starts off with Severus crying over the abuse received from her father. (I didn't know men and women deal with abuse differently.) Severus then proceeds to wallow in angst while talking with Lily about her blood heritage and which way to disdain said heritage. They meet James and Severus starts crushing on him, but James knows “that sharply angular, almost unnatural ugly face belonged to only one family in the entire wizardly community – the Prince family.” Snape turns down Lucius' order to not associate with the Mudblood. Chapter two starts with Snape being stared at. Says Snape says this to the Sorting Hat. “I just want to be taught. I don't want to cause any trouble. The last thing I wish is to have anyone see me. Please, Sorting Hat, put me in any House that will keeep me alive, keep me invisible. My father will kill me if I end up somewhere that I'll be focused on.” (She's supposed to be an example of a strong female character by the way.) The sorting hat thus sorts her into Ravenclaw. Lucius' father is interested in the Prince heir. (Why? He would know Snape is a half-blood.) Lucius knows she is abused because she bears the markings. They don't sweep in to save Snape and put up with her friendship with the Mudblood for the following reason. “It will do us little good to save her from her home life if we alienate her at school by trying to separate her from his friend. Boarding schools – especially one such as Hogwarts – have a way of changing people. I do not think their friendship will last, especially if this friend is in another House.” (I think the writer is going to have the friendship break up because of guy trouble involving James. Nothing much happens in the next two chapters which are up.
ORIGIN: “Oh, I made him a female because there are not enough strong women in the Harry Potter world.” For more of what the writer has to say on this matter see the author's note included in the sample. As the title says she's sorted into Ravenclaw instead of Slytherin. (If Severus still has issues with her blood status wouldn't she still be sorted into Slytherin. The writer really didn't think this one out. “While Alice wasn't a narrow minded girl, there was just something about Severus that rubbed her wrong.” Says Alice, “That Severus girl didn't seem like the kind of person a friendly and outgoing person like Lily would be friends with.” One of the reviewers also writes this in their review. “And why are you writing Lily as a very nervous person? She was popular and confident, from what we know.”
SPECIAL ABILITIES: As the origin says the writer made Severus female because they didn't think there were enough strong females in the Harry Potter series. Problem is the female version she created can't be called a strong woman any more then Bella Swan can. The writer decided to get rid of Snape's love for Lily rather then (as one of the readers so kindly pointed out) going the more interesting route of making Snape lesbian. (I blame this on the writer turning Snape into a female because she wanted a strong female character.) For some reason her dad who has no magical powers knows what is going on at the school. Severus' name as one of the reviewer's pointed out is still Severus instead of something like “Severa” or “Severia”. Here is what Malfoy senior (not Lucious) says in regards to Snape. “That girl is future consort to the rulers of the Nether World – the sole link between them and us. Whatever power they posseeses is also heres. Whoever controls the girl, controls that power.” We also eventually find out “Everyone of the Prince family bloodline has only one child, so Eileen is the only one.”

NOTES: The writer's disclaimer says, “I don't own the world of Harry Potter, I just own this idea.” I didn't know you could copyright changing the gender of a particular canon character. The writer is guilty of abusing the thesaurus. At least one of the reviewers agrees with the writer about the series lacking strong female characters.

I also found this review.

“No offense, (although I'm still trying to figure out why they changed breeds in the movies- maybe because of Scooby?), but Fang was a boarhound (aka great dane), in the books & a mastiff in the movies.”

I found this on the wikipedia page for Great Danes. “The large boarhound or Molossian hound continues to appear throughout ancient Greece in subsequent centuries right up to the Hellenistic era.” The page for Great Danes says “Extremely large boarhounds resembling the Great Dane appear in ancient Greece; in frescoes from Tiryns dating back to 14th–13th centuries BC.”

The page for the Molosser says “Molosser is a category of solidly built, large dog breeds that all descend from the same common ancestor.” The page also says “Although some Molossers are used for search and rescue, such as the Newfoundland and the Saint Bernard, most (for example Mastiffs) are used as guard dogs, due to their deep voices and natural guarding instincts, or livestock guardian dogs for protection against large predators as well as poachers. Some breeds like the Greater Swiss Mountain Dog have also been used as cart dogs.”

Can anyone recollect whether Rowling actually referred to Fang's breed in the books? I should also point out the Great Dane is a mastiff which means the reviewer said, “Fang was a mastiff in the books and a mastiff in the movies”. It comes down to the German Mastiff versus the Neapolitan Mastiff. Research is important.

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3465: New Year's Eve - Hermione and Ginny
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TITLE: New Year's Eve
PERPETRATOR: The Deadly Bunny
SUE-O-METER: TOXIC (toxic)
COVER/BANNER ART: The avatar is I believe a picture of the writer.
SUMMARY:”New Year has come around again and Ginny decides to take things to a new level in the bedroom with her wife. PWP, kinky, femmeslash. Don't like, don't read! Written on a prompt.”
FULL NAME: Ginny and Hermione
SPECIES: They're a married couple.
HAIR: n/a
EYES: n/a
MARKINGS: n/a
POSSESSIONS: “As she dragged the material higher, another thing was revealed; the garter belt that was holding up the stockings matched both her panties and bra, which were both made from luxurious black lace. When the dress finally came completely off, her lover looked positively scrumptious.”
CONNECTION TO CANON: The chapter starts off with Hermione getting off in the shower as she touches herself. She goes to her mother-in-laws house. Ginny slips her a sleeping drrought, strips her, ties her up and proceeds to eat food off her and do other things.
ORIGIN: We're supposed to believe the two are married. We're also supposed to believe Hermione wants it as well.
SPECIAL ABILITIES: The writer's trying to pass non-consensual as consensual. The characters are also out of character.

NOTES: I wonder if the writer knows non-consensual sex is still rape even if the two involved are married. The writer admits their story is PWP and yet warns people “don't like, don't read”. The summary screams “I'm MA content posted on a site which doesn't allow MA content.”

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2463: Undone - Harry Potter and Draco Malfoy
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TITLE: Undone
PERPETRATOR: Lifesacrcle
SUE-O-METER:
COVER/BANNER ART:
SUMMARY:”"I think that would be more of a punishment for you than it would be for me." Harry smirked as Draco flushed, knowing the words that Potter had spoken were true. "Well then, I'll... I'll break up with you," Malfoy said triumphantly, glad to have come up with a suitable punishment. "Draco... we're married." Contains very mature content. Malexmale. Drarry. Don't like, don't read.”
FULL NAME: Harry and Draco
SPECIES: Two characters who normally don't get along getting along
HAIR: n/a
EYES: n/a
MARKINGS: n/a
POSSESSIONS: n/a
CONNECTION TO CANON: The whole point of the story is Draco and Harry fucking each other with no character development as to how they ended up together.
ORIGIN: I think the summary does this one justice.
SPECIAL ABILITIES: They like each other for no given reason.

NOTES: Smut for the sake of smut. That's what this story is.

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2462: My meddling trip to Hogwarts - Astrid "Asta" Greyhound and Alice
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TITLE: My meddling trip to Hogwarts
PERPETRATOR: Mizuki-23
SUE-O-METER: AWFUL (awful)
COVER/BANNER ART: The cover is the cover of the third Harry Potter book.
SUMMARY:”Asta is your normal girl - though a little bit introverted - but she has an obsession. With Harry Potter, fanfiction and yaoi. So, what will happen if this yaoi fangirl is magically teleported into the Potter Universe? Do you see where I'm going with this? - Yaoi means maleXmale - don't like, don't read. Pairing: Sirius/Severus, Side!Lily/James [OC is not paired with anyone!]”
FULL NAME: Astrid “Asta” Greyhound and Alice
SPECIES: We have a fangirl and her best friend.
HAIR: n/a
EYES: n/a
MARKINGS: n/a
POSSESSIONS: Alice has an “ever so perfect boyfriend”.
CONNECTION TO CANON: The first chapter opens up with Asta having sleeping issues regarding her morning exams. She's afraid of waking up and missing her exam time and complains about how everything is perfect in the life of her best friend Alice. They celebrate that school is done and suddenly they're driving to Hogwarts and getting to meet their favorite characters and chatting with them as if they've always been friends.
ORIGIN: “ This is the introduction to the main character. Yes, the main character is an OC (original character), but she is just the narrator (and more). And she plays an important role for this. So bear with it. I will not switch between P.O.V.'s (Point of View's) because.. I won't. I like her P.O.V., so changing it would be stupid, now wouldn't it? That also means no sex scenes, because would it really be enjoyable for you to know that a person is watching them while they have sex? No? That's exactly my thought. But I may refer to sexual content thus the rating T.”
SPECIAL ABILITIES:

NOTES: The OC's meddling apparently includes getting Severus and Sirius together.

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2461: Unfortunate Aftermath - Draco Malfoy, Harry Potter
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TITLE: Unfortunate Aftermath
PERPETRATOR: angievalentine189
SUE-O-METER: AWFUL (awful)
COVER/BANNER ART: Their cover art is a collection of six fanart pieces for the pairing done in chibi style.
SUMMARY:”6th year and up! Bl, don't like don't read. Possible selective Weasly bashing. Draco confesses his true feelings to Harry, which leaves our poor savior questioning how he feels. Will he accept him? Will things work out in everyone's' favor? Or will things go downhill fast? Sucky summary, I promise the story will be better. Will probably be pretty long Alternates between H/D P.O.V.”
FULL NAME: Draco Malfoy, Harry Potter
SPECIES: They're supposedly canon characters.
HAIR: n/a
EYES: n/a
MARKINGS: n/a
POSSESSIONS: n/a
CONNECTION TO CANON: The first chapter is from Draco's point of view and is all over the place. For some reason after getting hit with the curse Severus Snape invented Draco confesses to Harry his true feelings. Draco also goes into how he first falls in love with Harry. Chapter two has Harry going from guilt stricken over hurting Draco to thinking about how Draco confessed to him. He thinks perhaps “Malfoy hit his head when he was knocked back by the Sectumsempra...?” before going into “I'm not gay; I've been head over heels for Ginny all year” and goes into a rant about how he isn't gay and how “there's no way he would actually be gay for me...” There is the usual spat with Ron and Hermione, and then suddenly starts thinking about how hot Draco is and decides he is in love with Draco because he complimented Draco. He then goes to approach Draco. Chapter three has Draco having angst about how pathetic he was. He and Harry decide to meet up in the Room of Requirement later on. Harry says he can't return his feelings and blushes, but they decide to suddenly work together as Draco decides to suddenly switch sides as he's fine with just being friends. The chapter ends as Draco “lightly kissed the base of Harry's throat,” and claims he'll get Harry to fall in love with him “before you know it”. The firth chapter is Draco trying to seduce Harry despite the other things which should be bothering him. They plan on talking to Ron and Hermione about Draco switching sides.
ORIGIN: “What they didn't know was that since the end of the Triwizard tournament he had recognized his true feelings for previously mentioned Scarhead and as an unfortunate aftermath of the grogginess he felt as he woke up in the hospital wing after his duel with Harry in the bathroom.....
SPECIAL ABILITIES: “Draco remembered how jealousy burned inside of him when he heard Harry had asked tha -nasty Cho Chang to the ball then the Patil Girl. He of course had to ask Pansy in order to keep up appearances as the perfect Slytherin prince. He had down his best to keep Pansy off him as much as he could and only danced with her in order to stealthily trip Harry and his date as they danced....Not that they really needed sabotage, Harry wasn't exactly dancer of the year....but it gave him a chance to get close and look at Harry with his beautiful green eyes and that dazzling smile...not to mention that perfect arse...”

NOTES: I want to duck my head into a bucket of ice for some reason.

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2460: Harry Potter 8th Year - Harry Potter and company
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TITLE: Harry Potter 8th Year
PERPETRATOR: alexpotter500
SUE-O-METER: BAD (bad)
COVER/BANNER ART:
SUMMARY:”Harry and the gang are back, this time to have fun(finally!) As the Gryffindors are bored during the Christmas break, the Slytherins are just as bored. Don't like, don't read. I know I suck at summaries, soz about that. Enjoy!:) written while listening to bed of lies(Nicki Minaj)”
FULL NAME: Harry, Hermone, Parvati, Padma, Lavender, Draco, Blaise, Pansy, Gregory
SPECIES: (see connections to canon)
HAIR: n/a
EYES: n/a
MARKINGS: n/a
POSSESSIONS: n/a
CONNECTION TO CANON: They're supposidly the canon characters between the age of eighteen and nineteen.
ORIGIN: The characters randomly decide to play truth and dare and act like hyper idiots.
SPECIAL ABILITIES: Everyone can yell “WWWWWWWWHHHHHHHHHHAAAAAAAAATTTTTTTTT?" in all caps.

NOTES: I suspect the writer is rather young.

If the characters haven't grown out of playing truth and dare they will have at least grown out of acting in such a childish manner.

<lj-cut text="Really?> <b>SAMPLE:</b> <i> Harry's P.O.V. Shoulda known, I thought. I mean I killed Voldemort, obviously people are staring at me, he thought to himself. Wish they would stop doing that, it creeps me out! "Hey Neville. D'you wanna play Truth or Dare?" I asked one of my best friends. He was one of the ones that supported me in 5th year and helped me kill Voldemort, as I told him afterwards. "Sure," he said. I smiled at him. Meanwhile... Hermione's P.O.V. "Hi, Parvati, Padma, Lavender. Wanna play Truth or Dare with me and the guys?" I asked the three girls. They stared at me, amazed. "Oh, bloody hell. I helped Harry kill Voldemort, cut me some slack, I should be able to swear and act like a kid, I've acted like an adult for the last seven damn years." They still stared at me. Then Lavender said, "Sure, we'd love to play. See you in a bit," and they went.

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